As soon as he got out of the car,Tom felt uneasy.The body he saw between the wood caught his attention,he didn't know why,but he wanted to see it.He began to walk slowly to the body.As he came towards it,the smell became worst.Finally he saw it, it was the body of a boy of about ten years covered with blood.
Tom started to investigated the body and discovered that there was a cut in the boy's neck,someone killed him.Suddenly he saw a shadow behind a tree and heart the shout of a
woman. Maybe it was the shadowof the murderer, so Tom started to follow it. He was running when he suddenly heard a shout, he saw arond, and he saw a woman with a kinfe in her stomach. She was looking at him and, her last words were"he is a monster, behind ,be care..." she couldn`t finished the phrase , she had died.Tom was in shock, he could feel something in his back, something or someone was behind him watching him.
He started running to his car, but he got lost and the night was coming, after some hours of walking on the darknes, Tom felt tired , he look his watch and was midnightat the same time he had watched, he felt a cold running behind him.
That was the last day Tom was seen,
and nobody could find his body.
Milagros and Lucas
5 comments:
Amazing!!!! You've really improved! Thanks for sharing your stories.
A very interesting story!But what I liked most is your work.Great improvement
Ann:
thanks for your coment, we are very glad to hear that we have inproved.
Thanks
Lucas
It's exelent, it is really interesting and it is very easy to read too. You have a fantastic imagination.
Lucas, Mili is a great story. When you are reading it you want to stay hours but is short. We love ghost's or monster's stories. You did a very good job and we like it so much!
See you,
Agus and Delfi
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